Email Etiquette: Holly's Howler

Here's the article on which this afternoon's email study was based: Deloitte Girl Quits.

1. Reread the contents of the email (pictured below).
2. Correct and rewrite the sentence that contains a number of comma splices.
3. Identify all the present perfects and explain why they are used.
4. Are informal awards ceremonies common in offices in your country of origin? Why or why not?
5. If you were in Holly Leam-Taylor's shoes, would you have resigned? Explain your answer.